(This is an add-on to a Conference ticket. Please be sure to purchase a conference ticket in addition to this add-on. Any purchases without a conference ticket will be returned.)

Did you know that Editors and Agents don’t always read past the first page of your manuscript? Yes! This is sad, but true. Does your first page have what it takes to keep the editor or agent reading on? Is your beginning engaging? Is your character likable? Does the plot move forward? We’ve developed this opportunity so you can get the necessary feedback. 

A First Page Critique gives your First Page a trial run. During the Girl Power Hour Conference you will get fast and honest feedback from Lynne Marie, an editor at The Little Press, with first impressions as well as helpful suggestions that you can carry through to the manuscript’s successful resolution. 

Don’t waste a submission – focus on making your first page the very best it can be BEFORE you send it out to agents and editors. Only $25 with conference registration.

We will be reading a portion of these during breaks and will complete the remainder of the submissions at the day’s end.