For Picture Books through Middle Grade Novels

From multi–award-winning author, children’s book publisher, and elementary educator Michele McAvoy, this personalized critique and consultation service provides expert insight and honest feedback to help your story shine.

Whether you’re just starting out or refining a final draft, Michele brings her experience from both sides of the publishing desk—editorial, creative, and educational—to guide you toward a stronger, market-ready manuscript.

Each session can include:

• Manuscript Review: In-depth notes on story structure, pacing, character development, and emotional resonance.

• Concept Discussion: Explore your story’s hook, theme, and developmental potential.

• Marketability Assessment: Evaluate genre fit, audience appeal, and current market trends.

• ARC or Developmental Discussion: Review early drafts or advance reader copies to polish before submission or publication.

You’ll receive professional, constructive feedback and actionable next steps designed to strengthen your story, clarify your vision, and help you navigate the path to publication—whether traditional or indie.

[Stories are discussed and reviewed during the call. This is not a line by line critique/revision. Materials can be shared prior to the consultation, however everything is reviewed and discussed on the call.]

After purchasing your consultation schedule a time using this Calendar link.